Wire Dancing
Dancing on the wire,twirling and turning,to the drumming winds demand.Perpetual motionwith no choice or will.Tied to each other,tied to the moment whenthey flew; exuberant arc,weightless...
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i think i'm dizzy now ... 15 "...ing" words out of 103 total[averaging one out of every 7].that's a lot of stuff goING on!left me feeling as though ihad been looking through akaleidoscope while on a...
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mmmm ... I like this ... and the thoughts evoked, val! this was like a moment of life ... captured and held still to look at ... and ponder. a definite feel of inevitability here ... beautifully done...
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A beautifully light touch, with sound, imagery and sense all contiributing to the feeling of (frenetic?) movement.I enjoyed it a lot. Many thanksDavie
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Davie, Beth and Ben - thank you so much for the attention and the kind words - they are appreciated Beth - I'm glad you picked up the moment in time thing.... I was looking at a pair of gym shoes,...
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Is there no end to this talent my friend..what an exuberant piece!BravoTal
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Thank you Tal - you're appreciated "Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble." -Arabic Parable
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i very much enjoyed the idea of the poem and thought it wll written. cheers JD
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Thank you John I appreciate your attention to this."Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble." -Arabic Parable
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>>>tied to the moment,>>>and dancing. Those last two lines, say it all....excellent Val !!!
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Was this a memory Val? It may not have been, but it seemed like a flashback to me. Either way, great job, I enjoyed it. And even if it wasn't a memory for you, thanks for bringing back some for me.
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Wolf and Marc - thank you very much No - it wasn't a memory - just a chain of thought sparked of by seeing some gym shoes on a telephone wire."Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but...
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I found this to be a well conceived piece that I was able to enjoy on several levels. lots of action mixed with nostagia watching the present pulling these words out of you. nice read. best, peterlord
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Thank you Peter, for your thoughtful response - I appreciate it "Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble." -Arabic Parable
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valoe if I had not read other responses I would havesaid it is the joy of finishing studies like youth and the end of high school toss everything or maybe it is my urge to be finished my studiesand...
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I've seen those too...and wondered...a moment of pure joy, or a moment of loss...depends who is doing the throwing, I guess...great observational piece! Exit light...Enter night...Take my hand...We're...
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Thank you Paul and David your comments are always appreciated."Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble." -Arabic Parable
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